Reviews for Cry
Patrick Vicens chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
again emotional and lovely, crying is something everyone needs to do... but don't let it rule ur life )
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Nice work!
W. Campbell chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
Very well written. I like the title since most people will be able to relate to it. Is the "CRY" at the beginning of each verse intentional?
If it is or isn't get rid of it since it distracts and takes away from the poem.
Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
Beautiful Work *sobs uncontrolably* I completely relate lolers. Good emphasis on your point and nice imagery.

Keep it up!

pretty pink:)
manxvagrant chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
that was so sad...it made me cry...and think back on the many times I felt like that...i love it...
Next Exit chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
i really REALLY like this poem, its great how you repeated sry for each stanza to follow, i use that technique sometimes as well.