Reviews for Helpless Victim
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
lmao, definitely not expected and very cute, muchly enjoyed, nicely done
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
haha, that is cute! i like poems that 'mislead' you :) and then turn out to be something funny and innocent! way to go! &D
handle187 chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Nice ! Creative, very well thought-out. Learn from this person, kiddies !
Free-Writer chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Great twist at the end!
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
LOL! Good way to fool us all! I had the vision of some heart doctor, hehe :) Great work!

Keep writing!
Autumn tears chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Jelly donuts! I love them, except I usually stuff 'em all in my mouth! Great ending :D
quietdrama22 chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
It fooled me. Funny, keep writing : )
lebuffle chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
Hilarious! That really had me fooled. Gj!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
LOL man! for me it was a cake! :D
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Bravo..LOL...Loved it!
teh tarik chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Cute! At first I thought it was some doctor operating on someone until the last line. It's good!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
*falls anime style*

Well, that caught me off guard! _

Heart of the Sword
tiger chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
it should have been a real.

u got me all excited and got my hopes up and then u crushed me with the doughnut!
Falling Stars chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
lol! Good surprise ending!
Kumo Okano chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
haha... that was cool... _

i like jelly doughnuts! hehe