|Reviews for Helpless Victim|
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
lmao, definitely not expected and very cute, muchly enjoyed, nicely done
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
haha, that is cute! i like poems that 'mislead' you :) and then turn out to be something funny and innocent! way to go! &D
| handle187 chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Nice ! Creative, very well thought-out. Learn from this person, kiddies !
| Free-Writer chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Great twist at the end!
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
LOL! Good way to fool us all! I had the vision of some heart doctor, hehe :) Great work!
| Autumn tears chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Jelly donuts! I love them, except I usually stuff 'em all in my mouth! Great ending :D
| quietdrama22 chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
It fooled me. Funny, keep writing : )
| lebuffle chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
Hilarious! That really had me fooled. Gj!
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
LOL man! for me it was a cake! :D
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Cute! At first I thought it was some doctor operating on someone until the last line. It's good!
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
*falls anime style*
Well, that caught me off guard! _
Heart of the Sword
| tiger chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
it should have been a real.
u got me all excited and got my hopes up and then u crushed me with the doughnut!
| Falling Stars chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
lol! Good surprise ending!
| Kumo Okano chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
haha... that was cool... _
i like jelly doughnuts! hehe