That was moving...very good job.

Wow... This is awsome! Truly wonderful. .

Another great piece of work. This was cleverly written and conveyed a deep message. I especially liked the second last stanza. Keep up the good work :)

*cosmo-queen*

It's always nice to meet someone who sees the world with more than jsut their eyes. Once again, beautifully written and thought provoking.

~ Heidi

I really like this! Almost sad but not quite. Keep it up!

I already told you, but thought I'd post this. I really like it. Keep up the writing streak!

That's kinda sad, to me. but it's good. You write very well, and don't believe otherwise.

Yay, the formatting worked! Huzzah!

Anyway. Great rhyme scheme, steady rhythm, and a great song all together. See? Writing a song in six minutes isn't necessarily a BAD thing...!