WOW, Bailey that was great! The use and choice of words you use were Powerful. Its hard to belive that came out of the hipper, happy girl I know. It was very moving and described the way I feel alot of the time.

Just keep fighting the barricades. I promise, they do fall down.

i know how you feel...my darkness still binds me, and pobably always will...can i join you in your corner? we can be outcasts together...

really well poetry is really good, just like your storys...i look forward to your next post.._

I don't often read poetry, but I thought I'd give yours a shot... and I really liked it. It was sad and strong. Very emotional.

I especially liked you lines:

"Instead I sit patiently,

Facing a corner

With my bak t the life

That seems to hate me so much."

They were the lines that stayed in my mind the whole way through.

Wow! That was really good! A great description... Awesome.. *wiipes tear from eye* 'It's A Pirates Life For Me.' ROCKS!1