Reviews for ON THE AVENUE: Gentleman for a Day
Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Once again, well written dealing with so many characters and feelings all at once. I can see why you split this up into various scenarios, it would be seriously crowded as one story.

I wish there were more of these little glimpse into life "On the Avenue." It's been great, you've really entertained me. Thanks.
Kassandra chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
DarkStar616 chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
kynthiaphellan chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Update soon?
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Wow, nice story. I do wonder what will happen to nelson when he finds out Lina's in love with Harold. Keep up the good work! Take care!
Catherine Kate chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
What can I say...

It's so...




I just can't explain how you made me feel.

It's so beautiful, almost fulfilling, that I want to finish or continue it by myself.

But, of course, I cannot do such horrible thing...

Die, asshole!(joke?)

You're so damn good!

Sure as the Dawn chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
gohst chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
hey nice story you should toltally make a second chapter if youd like to talk i don't have an account yet but you can reach me at ok well alter i look forward to reading the next chapter :)
giroshi-hitada chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
I love it! plz update!
whateva123 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
please do update i think this chapter is rocking.
seasofsilence chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Keep writing! It's really good: I like it. There are a few grammar errors, though. Run it through grammar check.
Toxxic Hugs chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Love the story, the plot, and Harold. Please update soon!
Dirty Secret chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
This story's quite good actually.

I was never one who judges someone by their names but...Harold? *Shudders* Is he supposed to be the 'bad boy' of this story? Cuz it doesn't look it. Harold reminds me of a nerdy kinda boy (no offense)...and so does Nelson...*chuckles*. Anywayz, go on with the story, I wanna see how it flows/goes/ends (whatever)
lil.ditzy chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Its a good start! I like it alot! So hurry up and update!Its actually long too...unlike my chapters which is why I like it..hehe
Lost Inside chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Heheh That was pretty funny. Good job! I hope you update soon!

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