Reviews for The River's Lament
Quid chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
That was beautiful. The imagery was great and the rhyme didn't sound too forced. Just beautiful.
Cheyenne Kai chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
another appealing poem, love your work, keep writing!
pUpPyLoVeR827 chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
i really like the way you rhyme and how your words flow
Be Summer Rain chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I loved the bit about the shadowed layers of time. This poem was gorgeous.
I'm leaving fictionpress chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
This was nice, i liked the flow of it. _

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Frodo chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Interesting. I love how it flowed. Good job!

-Frodo
Kezarahk chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Pretty.
the seventh seal chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
I love the lament. Kinda makes me feel like I had written it, lol. r&r some of my stuff, thanks.
TwyliteRose chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
please review this, i want to know what people think of it. thanks!