Reviews for Unending Dark
Irrana chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
Here's a tip, actually leave a little explination or summary of the poem so people will know what it's about when they look at it. That's something I always look at and find that if a summary appeals to me I'll read it. Not only the title.

Okay it started out well, then as soon as you got to teh rabbit you lost me. What is the relivence of the rabbit? And the rabbit stew... yes so in my opinion the last 7 lines were 'ify'

But I do like the beginning and again your description there.
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
I can't get enough of your stuff, seriously! Great work yet again. I loved the words and the rhyming scheme, and I LOVED the first part, it all just flowed together, keep writing!
tutseti chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
It is so hard to find a rhyming that that's actually good now-a-days. This was awesome! Keep it up
Arayuldawen chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I really like this. The poem flows really well _

BlckCandleFlames chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
i like it. it's really flowing and stuff, and i envy your rhyming ability. i can't rhyme at all, but hey. i know how you feel about people not reviewing your stuff. no one reviews mine either. please read and review my latest (it's all shattered now) if you have time. PLEASE! thanks
Poetic Breakdown chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
That's really awesome! I love your use of words. Keep writing!
TwyliteRose chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
please review this, I want to know what people think. thank you!