|Reviews for FanFictionnet|
| HarryPotterSNL chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
haha! Cute! It sounds like an advertisement for . I can totally here that on the radio!
| Cheese and DG chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
lol-that's some great stuff! Lol. That was so normal it was funny! But, you know what? I'm really sad that they deleted the Musical Groups section...i just about cried when they did! But yea, i'll read this when you update -k-
| Froberg chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
I have to agree with Echoes. Really, it's boring. Try and spice it up with a plot, write something interesting, make the dialogue a little realistic, time the dialogue a little better, try... No, you know what? Forget about this story. I hate telling you this, but I really don't think that you can save it. *sorry*
However, I won't discourage you from writing anything else! Just... practice, I suppose. And remember the two most important rules: 1) make it interesting and 2) make realistic characters (that includes dialogue)
| One True Pirate chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
It's a little boring, don't you think?