that's really sweet

The last stanza was the best, excellent work!

i like it too! its so sweet and beautifully profound! rock on! ur goin on my fave authors list! rickety rock on!

I really like it. It's a really good poem, your rhyming is supurb! I always like reading people who are talented with rhyming, a friend of mine on this site is talented as you. :-) Keep up the terific work!
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keep up the good work!

Heh, I like this one. The last couple of lines are very powerful, especially since you emphasize them by using an alternate rhyme-scheme. I'm not sure if you want to take that further and divide it into three lines instead of two.

Though filled with glee

I'd rather be

holding Jamie's hand.

I dunno. Anyway, it's a great poem, I'm really impressed.

tbm