Reviews for Invisible Outside, Numb Within
Shi no Yume chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Wow...that's wonderful, keep up the great work!
insanemonkeyboy chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
I liked this poem... it isn't too often that I come across poetry that I can relate to... but I can definitely relate to that (except the girl part o.o) anyway... nice job
Winter Requiem chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Hey, its me, Nameless Wanderer in my account thingy. once again, I LOVE THIS POEM!
Human Wasteland chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
*adds story to fav list*

Yet another brilliant poem. Moving, emotional, everything. Love it. Why didn't I think of this first? *Talent Sucking Orb*
A-Million-Thoughts chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
This is possibly the best song i have ever read. I love your writing style and i totally agree with the lyrics. If you have Msn messenger then i would love to talk to you. Liek minded people always get on
anon63 chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
"I'm tired of living a lonely life

Tired of worshipping the blade of a knife"

Those lines stood out.

Toward the beginning i was sharply reminded of Reflection from Mulan.

Enjoyed it a lot, intriguing theme.
Inoperative chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
love it...just love it...i'll come back and review later, but at the moment i'm really tired, so there you go...