zeecrazyeggbloos chapter 2 . 3/31/2006 *dies* SO GOOD
ur just you chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
god, this is such a good story, when i saw that cha almost died i started crying.. im such a sappy person.. lol, anyways cant wait for the sequel.. and this is suppose to be a review for the last chap.. but i was too lazy to go back to it, cause i logged off, and was like wait i should review lol, so cant wait for the sequel! :) and your other stories coming up!
Rhiannnon chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
I love this sotry babe, I have loved it from the second you let me read the proofs of the first few chapters ... and why arn't all those other stories you listed up? I know for a fact that some of them have quite good beginnings because have read them .. The other day, I was laying in bed wondering ... what was that book called .. what was it called .. then I remembered it wasn't a book at all, it was the beginning of one of your stories :) Talk to you later
Dark Arrow chapter 30 . 11/16/2005
This was a great story, it was worth reading it even though I have tons of homework to do. I hope in the sequel Cha will probably have a kid. :) Great job!
BeautifulSin chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
booklover114 chapter 31 . 11/14/2005
Hi I think I have reviewed before but I am not sure. Well I just wanted to say a few things about your story, I am a history buff so there are some little quirks about your story that get to me. Well for one thing about the whole cha being upset about the prince not being a virgin, well she probably wouldn't be because whether the man was religious or not, unless he was a munk of priest they had some fun inbetween the sheets no matter what, it was sort of expected. Women also, if they were married, had affairs in nobel society. Also the princes mother would not have made a big deal about her son sleeping with a servant because often royalty had many bastard children by maids or by pesaent and tarven whores. So that issue sort of rubbed me wrong. Um other then that the story is pretty good except that like you said Cha did have a sort of lack of character in this story, and considering she is the main character its a bit of a let down. Other then that, oh the Cha keeping herself a virgin, more then likely it was either really hard or she didn't encounter a lot of men because there were many servent that were raped by lords, its not commonly talked about but true. So that guy that lord who is obsessed with her, he would probably have raped her by then considering his treatment of her, and his personallity. Other then those things the story is really good and I like it keep up the good work.
Rock and Roll Instead chapter 30 . 11/13/2005
Oh my goodness, this has never happened before. This story successfully brought tears to my eyes when Cha almost died.

This was a wonderful story. Absolutely wonderful.

coffeedecadence chapter 30 . 11/12/2005
please please please please please upload the sequel. i love this fic!
HippieHebe chapter 2 . 10/27/2005
Post the sequel to this soon! We're all dying here, girl. Or atleast post Destiny's Path up again! *shakes finger* Shame on you, making us wait. :P
asga chapter 30 . 10/23/2005
ow this is good and lol i cried alot cose this story so angsty but i am happy that this is happy ending xD
Raomina chapter 30 . 10/9/2005
This story is so fairytale-like. Except the part where Cha's heart stopped beating -that reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. The characters were well-developed, though it would've been better if the 'love' part of their relationship was more emphasized than their 'lust'. It was not written how she understood him, like he said, or what kind of conversations they had in private. It was mostly kissing right from the start. The character Anna was only in the story for a brief moment, to make Cha jealous, but she disappeared quite abruptly.

Other than that, it was a really angsty story and I cried loads. Good storyline.
Dirty Secret chapter 30 . 10/8/2005
WOW! This story's completely, utterly amazing! Splendid, perfect, sweet, extraordinary! Love it.
DarkestSecrets chapter 30 . 9/22/2005
OMG! this is such a good story! at the point where Cha was shot i cried so hard,please pardon my very emotional behaviour, but it was so sad they are so perfect together! oh pls pls write the sequel soon!
KN chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
I loved this story when I first read it 2 years ago, finally I have found it again, well written and a job well done!
awaitinglove chapter 30 . 8/6/2005
LOVE THIS STORY! It made me cry a ton but i still loved it to death! And i can't wait until the sequel! Hurry with that!
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