You have a pretty nice story here. I hope you continue. Keep writing! :)

That didn't work... you put a less than sighn, then an 'i', then a greater than sight. to end the italicized text, you out a less than sighn, then '/', then an 'i', then a greater than sighn.

lovley story. Simply bautiful. Keep working! I forgot to mention this: In case you do not know HTML, ti italicise txt you simply do this: put your text here

I've read this story twice, thus far, but the Prince told her 5th corridor, not fourth. I know that that isn't too important... I made a mintake with a main character's NAME in one of my stories, but it usually helps to pay attention to detail. If you want italicized text to stay that way, simply use HTML or select 'save as webpage' when you save it in microsoft word.

Thumbs up darling! - Have you tried saving as a filtered web page? It's in the drop down table where it sayd "word document" in the save area! thought you might like to know!

this is a beautifully ritten story. i was wondering if u cud read and review my own, if u search my name they come up (Natasha5) it wud b an honor if sum1 as talanted as u cud possibly take the time 2 read mine.

Again, a beautiful story.

loadsa luv,

Natashax

Hey~~

Great story so far...I wonder if Cha will go to the prince..(o wait, she probably will...)and I wonder what will happen between Jake and Cha! Also, what's that Count guy gonna do next?I mean ppl like him never go away...they always come bak wit sum scheme or sumthin to kill the person or take the throne or sumthin like that...!

Awaitin ur next chappie!

BlueFairyDust

It's good, but I have just one request.

You space whenever there is a new paragraph, which starts when you have a person talking. I have trouble reading the story because it's not spaced correctly [ Please Please fix this!

I really, really, really like this story! I really, really, really want to read more. Please, PLease give me more!

I like your story. IT's pretty good so far. Please continue soon.