|Reviews for within her keeping|
| Linwe chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Wow! That's really good! The rythem is different; not so consistent, and definately one you don't see often, but in this poem, it fits perfectly and makes the poem flow wonderfully.
~Elf Princesses Always Get Their Way~
| Written chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Love the last few lines. A lot. The images this calls into my mind are very cool. Good work, and keep goin!
| Winged One1 chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
This is amazing! The imagery is so imageful (I am fully aware of how stupid that had to sound)
I disagree with EveningShroud, though. The punctuation doesn't matter. The beat is obvious if you read it.
| torn shadow chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
wonderful poem. well written, nicely described. i like it. good job. thanks for your review also.
| Dark Lil Corner chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
Where the heck is the puncuation? It was one huge long sentence that never finished because you never put a period. Punctuation is supposed to help the reader fing the beat of your poem and without, like I said, it's one long sentence with no pausing.
Other that that, it was... okay.
| TwyliteRose chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
please review this, thanks.