Reviews for Diamonds and Roses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I totally LOVE your story! I cant wait for your next update. What is gonig to happen is tugging my mind. THis story is awesome. |
![]() ![]() oh please please please please continue! ] |
![]() ![]() hi..i just wanted to tell you that your'e story diamonds and roses..is awesome..its creative and well written..besides that i was wondering if your'e planning on finishing it? I would really like to know how it all turns out...thanks..bye ~ophelia~ p.s.-keep up the good writing.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you have got to update soon! I can't believe this cliffhanger. Please please please please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just started reading your story and so far I really like it. I thought the first chpt was well written and I loved Cate's introduction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOD SOON. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm quite enjoying your story, but I do have one question: When Cate first met Alexander, she refused to tell him her last name. Then all of a sudden she's talking about her father and all her siblings by name, from which any intelligent person could figure out what family she's from. So when did that happen? If Cate is anywhere near as intelligent as you make her out to be, she would have thought of that. Alexander/Prince David certainly has it figured out. |
![]() ![]() Hey! I just read found and read your story. It's very good. Although it, along with most stories on this site, could do with a little editing I found the plot to be nicely drawn. I would like for some questions about it to be answered soon though. But that can only happen when you update. So update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the idea of this story however i find that your writing needs a lot of editing. you seem to write lots of unnecessary things, eg 'She left her traveling gown sitting on the bed—a servant would take it to be cleaned.' do you really need to put lines like this in? there were many more like this and i find that as a reader i skip these types of things when reading. instead of reading everythin in a story, i only skim through it. this is just something you might like to take into consideration when writing in the future. i will still continue to read though because like i said before the story is interesting and i 'd still like to know the ending. so dont be put off by my comment, continue writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I *just* found you story and I couldn't get up until I had read the entire thing. It's really really really really good! I hope your hiatus will be over soon. Please update :) Danica |
![]() ![]() Oh my Goodness! I'e just discovered this story, and reqd it in it's entirity! I do hope you'll update again shortly, it's fantastic and you've left it on such a cliffhanger! Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have only just discovered this. A delight to read, i do so want to find out more about Alexander!Write on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story...update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story is fantastic! i hope that you update in the near future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this is great! You must update soon! I beg you! |