Reviews for Tears
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
I like the first stanza the best, the whole thing is sad. Lol. I hope everything is okay!
Calmly Chaotic chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Beautiful. I think it was said perfectly.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
haha, i have a fren who can't control her tears! :O) Lovly haiku!

summerdazed
totallystellar13 chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
Your poetry (or that that I have read so far) seems to really express a lot of emotion and meaning in just a few lines. For you, it seems that the "Less is more" theory really does work, and it works like whoa fabulous too, buddy. lol

luv,

Meghan
SILVA-eR chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
Nice! This is neat!RHYMING! WHO! Well donE!
Anagronax chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
Nice one, this was.

I thank you for the review you left and I return the favor as well.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
interesting, two different sides to the same thing, always find that interesting and it seems to find patterns like that to a lot of things in life, anywayz, muchly enjoyed this and well written, nicely done
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
very cool and cute! i recommended your writings to a friend of mine :) gonna read more!
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
Wow, a rhyming haiku! This is so cool. And deep too.
Free-Writer chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
wonderful! you captured tears perfectly!
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Lol, nice rhyming :) Great work! I'm starting to like reading haiku now...

Keep writing!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Neat! I love how it rhymes!

CoolBeans18s
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
Yeah... that's the universal truth...this is great...
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
Cool, they did rhyme! These were great.

Heart of the Sword
Falling Stars chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
Really true... Good poem
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