|Reviews for Invisible|
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
Very good work! I've felt like that sometimes, good job :)
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
very sad, love the last stanza on this one, good floow to it too, its interesting and very self pitying, but that last stanza, i dunno, gave it a very different feel to the whole thing, muchly enjoyed, excellent job
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
i know how *that* feels. good portrayal!
| wildtenderness chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
aw,that's really nice.i think everyone needs someone that actually would give that person instant happiness i guess.
| GoldMetalGymnast chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
hey again, great story I feel exactly like that ALOT! and I just wanted 2 tell you that I have written 2 more poems so please read and review them!
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
eh, very exaggerated indeed goods anywasy! :D :D
| Jinxi chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
that's really good!
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Heart of the Sword
| Falling Stars chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
This was good. I tried to write something like this but I failed P ... You did a good job on it _
| Autumn tears chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
I know how you feel, even with the exaggerations. Like sometimes, no one cares. I loved the last line, keep it up! :D
| quietdrama22 chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Wow, it is a good poem. I hope it is exxagerated : ). Keep writing