Reviews for With you
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Wow this is so sad. Peace.
blue-dan chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Brilliant, especially the last couple of verses.
Isca chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
I love how you've expressed the idea that we can be 'everything' and 'nothing at all' all at the same time, depending on whether or not we're around people we love.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Dark poem, but so true.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
Thats just cool. Relatable to an extant. - Good job !

~ Noelle ~
yellow sparks chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
Very dark poem, yet light at the same time. It's funny how one person can make the world shift.
kep chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
Powerful and deep. A nice piece.