Reviews for You'll Be Mine
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Wow I feel conflicting emotions, both pity and aww that's cute the narrator is in love. Which is intresting.
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Well I have read a good number of your poems, and I like this one the best. Spend lot-o-money and get some really cool things!
yellow sparks chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
A very sweet poem. And it really brings out your feelings. I like the way you can do that in your writing.
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
It's a nice poem, and I like the rhyme scheme. Also, it kind of sounds like if you added a repeating part, like for a chorus, it would be a song. And music, of course.

The last line says "you'll me mine." Did you notice that? But I like the way it ends, if it's s'posed to say "because until the end of time/you'll be mine."
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
Simple and sweet. Completely dependant on one very sweet ('can help me', 'always there for me') person.

'You'll be mine' feels like a big, comforting hug. Very nice.