|Reviews for The Real World|
| Carablea chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
Well said. :) I didn't think I'd ever find another poem on this site with a reference to Charmed (mine is the other one, and you can probably tell I love the show;), but I did. And a nicely written one too. I especially liked
"No, this is the Real World
According to me
Where it's common to cry
And things die
Citizens are in need
Some require help to breath" part. (and of course the Charmed-references:)If you ever have the time and the right mood, please come and read more of my stuff:) Like my poem Watch Charmed...;)
| Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
I loved how you put in the comparison with "Charmed" The thing is with those shows, they show perfect people with perfect lives. Pshaw, nothing ever shows the Real World.
This was great!
-Cindy Moon *)
| MoLay chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
I liked this. esp how you brought the beginning back into play. Very alive, I could even picture the old trying to stand
| Shayne Edwin chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Very interesting. I like the contrasting views and everything. You bring up some very cool points. Well done.