Reviews for Awakening of the Guardian of the Nexus
avidelecteur chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
I'm assuming you're going to continue this...? Because at the moment the ending doesn't end it. I had some trouble keeping all the characters straight, and it wasn't clear what kind of creatures the mythical ones were. The switching perspectives didn't help. But your descriptions were very good, and I liked how you showed the gaurd's character. One thing I noticed in both of the fiction stories of yours that I've read is that you don't seem to have the tension and suspense that they deserve. I don't know why, but it doesn't keep me on the edge of my seat. Anyway, I'm only commenting on most of this because you seem to want criticism even about pretty small and unimportant things, so yeah. Keep up the good work!

~avidelecteur