|Reviews for Wonder|
| ciara chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
hey, that was nice, you are a warm gal.
| Matt chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
I would miss you and dont die please. Ive always been nice to you and it makes me feel bad to hear you talk about this even if it is a poem. Poems are only deep thoughs.
BYE BYE -Matt
| Blue Peanut chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
Hrm, it has an interesting meter to it, it seems to be missing some sylables (sp?) in places. Sorry, it's the musician in me coming out. Overall I think it's a wonderfully transposed poem (afterall, aren't poems just thought translated to pen?). I like the change of mood in the 3rd stanza, but there is alot more you could add here, and you've got the skills to do it! I'm sure such a great mind *would* be greatly missed.