aw! what a melancholy story! how sad... i like the way you told it tho.. it sounds like a little campfire story in itself

I would like to say I feel this is a perfect short story. Not just because I love the subject matter, or how you brought in so many needed yet stand alone characters, but because each atom was perfect. Every paragragh had all that it needed for that thought or scene. Complete knowledge.

Just amazing. I'm going to go through all your work

Donlee

Wow, your writing is spectacular. I've always been fascinated by the culture of the First Nations, and it's wonderful to see that you're writing a love story in that context. I'm curious as to what will happen next!

Will you consider reading my story 'Unravel'? I'd love to hear from you! :)