Reviews for All of me, all of you
Kay chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
This is wonderful I dont usually read things from writers who arent already dead but my new efforts are seeming to pay off
Virginia The Morbid chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
That was very... erotic. I liked it.
genny marie chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
hmm... i really do like this and the rhyme scheme is good but i feel that the rhyming sort of takes away from the message of the poem...good job however
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
ooh, I like! Rape kind of scares me some days but I still loved it! P

tok
boost-xplod chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
Hey, "All of me, all of you" is a very dark poem, fantastic actually, the words wrap together to form something i havent seen for a long time, you make the poem reach out to its reader, very intense, thanks for writing and sharing, hope to see more like this..

Jaz
Aries Jordan chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Rough sex! I've had some rough sex before, nothing this rough but sometimes animal urges take over.