Reviews for Childlike
HoldinOn2Him chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
This spoke to me too. Thanks for sharing , it was a pleasure to read. God Bless xxoo
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Another amazing piece! True, it is angsty indeed but it has its own beauty as well. Excellent work. Keep writing!

obsidian katana chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
wonderful! i like this a lot, nice rhyme and rhythm. the repetition works well with this also. awesome work!
PainKiller chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
You know, this poem could be interpreted in many ways, because it could mean different things to different readers. But, I think I caught a glimpse of what you were feeling you wrote this...

God is always with you. Remember that.

Your repetition was still marvelous, and I certainly loved the all the imagery with the stars and moon and heaven. No problems here. Keep writing.
ConcertMasterD chapter 1 . 7/24/2003

This poem really spoke to me, thanks for sharing... dreams... I love to dream; used to daydream all the time, and would get scolded for it. Dreams. Wow.

Very very good work!