Reviews for A Day Out o'er the Seas |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was such an amazing story. and an amazing ending :) incredib;e |
![]() ![]() this is one of the best stories i have ever read! all your works are great and truly are masterpieces deserving awards. thanks a lot for sharing such a wonderful talent, the stories are great and breathtaking and slowly weave togather to make sense yet is suspenseful! great job and hope you write more. the ones completed are marvellous! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Abe. 'nough said :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this. It took me fifteen minutes longer than I expected, but it was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad though, that you didn't really show the loss of his brothers, or something along those lines. After all, wouldn't they be the first thing in his mind after escaping that storm? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought edmund was dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happened to abe's brothers? Surely they're not dead because abe didn't even mourn them! I think Abe should probably show more guilt because technically, it was his fault they got captured. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, brilliantly writing with one logical yet surprising turn after another. Beautiful rich characters, it was truly wonderful, all loose ends covered moderately. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! I read it all at once. You're a talented writer. _ |
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