good job with this chap. It was pretty neat.

neat, keep it up. one question: does she only riad on her own town when she's a pirate?

well I didn't read your other one but I do really like this one. Iwant to keep reading.

lurvely story babe... i still cant picture Abe in my mind tho... and im sorry, i dont mean to be insulting... but i HATE HIS NAME :(, anywho, keep up the good work luv :)

Abrupt ending... Err, wouldn't someone arrest/kill Abe for killing the governor? And then kill Eleanor for being a pirate? Ah well. Nice story anyway, even if everything moved at a very quick pace. Good job.

How could you do that to Edmund, and then laugh!Why, why do you have to make cliffhangers at the end of chapters. I makes it incredible hard to stop reading. Abe going to have a spitting headache.

It's nice how they don't like each other just yet. It makes stories more interesting, and it's fun to watch (read) them fight. Poor Abe's getting hurt a lot. It's his fault though, for getting in her way.

You are good at making your characters personallities, and at making the reader hate one character and love another. The cliffhanger isn't that big, but I still must read on!

It's so interesting! I love it. First chapters are quite hard, but I think you have done an excellent job. I'm going to make this review short so I can keep reading. Review next chapter!

AWESOME! As usual. Love the ending (served the great toad right), and can't wait for your other stuff.

Ouch...Love the story, though! Will keep reading. Laters! KD

Good! I love the way you've made it so easy to be right there in the story. And no, it really has no connection to Pirates of the Carribean...(Good movie though...Jack Sparrow...yum...) Laters! KD

woot woot! i LOVE the endin! great story!

(:(:(: Peace Out :):):)

Aww... a happy ending! :D

Good chapter. :D