| Reviews for A Day Out o'er the Seas |
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   Lisa0211 chapter 2 . 7/24/2003 hardy har har har. hehe. i want to see what he does with her. this should be interesting. write more soon. i love it~Lisa~ |
| Jazzy Kitty chapter 2 . 7/24/2003 I like it so far - pirates are always great plot material, and Pirates of the Caribbean was a good movie, in my op. Update soon! It's gonna be really good, I can tell! Kitty Harlande |
| Flawless Storm chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 He deserved to be slapped. Great story, can't wait for more. Hint hint, hurry and update:) |
| Killer Tofu chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 Yeh i like it so far. The first paragraphs kinda had the feel of Pirates of the Carribean, but so far its good. |
| PinkPanther18 chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 Thats a great start!Update soon! |
| DarK-FreEdoM chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 I really liked the movie Pirates of The Caribbean... and this story reminds me of it! so please update i really like Eleanor.. she's feisty! hehe DarK-FreedoM |
| Luv and Peace chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 GO ELEANOR! lol, very cool, you've got to update soon. |
| gm3fr3k chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 this...this is BEAUTIFUL! Abe is just like me! lolz...update! |
| Lisa0211 chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 Hey, I'm having trouble keeping all of them sibs straight...:0) So I suggest saying something to the effect of : He was the oldest of however many siblings: 4 boys and 3 girls. Then proceed to name them in order of birth. That would help. Loving her spunk though. i would have been pissed...oh I'm hot...great...now you want to marry me to get beneath my massive layers of skirts...how NICE. NOT! Well, great start. And don't worry, I don't care that it's a pirate story just so long as its entertaining. It certainly is so far. i really like th female lead. definately have to write more soon! ~Lisa~ |