|Reviews for A Running Man|
| Merlin85 chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Nice story. Details are great when used purposely. Since i have kinda been neglected could you possibly read one of my stories? I feel i need an opinion from an intelectual such as yourself. thnx anywaz gory story
| R.J. Miller chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Very good story, I had envisioned a long drawn out tale about a serial killer and dropped into a vampire tale, excellent! Thank you
| cillian4 chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Good hook!Very good I love a vampire story with a suprise ending.
| Rose Castello chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
wow that was really deep
| Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
I really enjoyed this piece. Jason sounds like a creepy guy to mess with. I'm not quite sure the rating of the story should be PG-13, if I am wrong, it doesn't matter heh. Its creepy, the graphic image of Mister Feldman is disturbingly,well done. I would rate this a strong R for its graphic content, just a thought.
ANywho, it was suspenceful, and maybe one day Jason will meet up with Michael Myers heh.
| unclepauly chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Short and sweet, this story wastes no time and goes straight for the kill. Quite liked the opening, about the history of the knives, thought that was cool.
| Leigh Nithra chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
holy crap that was freaky your a good writer and are definitely going on my fave authors list
| Malachi chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Nicely done. You're writing style is strong and the tale was entertaining.
| Strider Hunter chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
Haha, very original story, Willum. Short and sweet, very satisfactory ending.
| Diana Shore chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
| L.A.Rose chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Yes! That was great! Great little story, very enjoyable! :)
| BloodBrother chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Mister Feldman's first response was the best - Out of the little dialogue, it made for a very good ending. Nice job.
| Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Ew, the drinking blood part was DISGUSTING! But otherwise pretty good. The ending was kind of a surprise.
But how could Mr. Fwldman heal himself? Does he have some kind of super power or something?