Reviews for Strawberry girl
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
I like the realism..is that the right word? The sincerity, but kind of removed in a way. I don't know if I'm making sense.
Lovely White chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
WOw.. Loved it. I like your style of writing. It's kind of simple but deep in the same time.
Kierst chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
I really liked this. It was almost funny in a way, but I really feel your frustration. You sent the message across in a fun way.
Silverfire Starr chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
I like the way u wrote this poem. Straightforward.

good job on this piece,

s.s.
NeWriter chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Its a bit confusing when you said I told the strawberry girl I hated you now. You knwo what I mean? Some poems you want them to rhyme but the rhyming has to make some sense too. Lol. *poke poke* Great work though! D