Reviews for Beneath the Window
orangefreak33 chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Morbid, yes. But not a bad morbid...

I don't know what I'm talking about.

Hers was the heart 'neath the floorboards

That beat soundless rhythms in the dark

-reminds me of the telltale heart.
CaitSpain chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
Oh, I liked that very much. It would make a delightful series of songs! I especially loved verse V, the whole thing about the piano. Anything musical always strikes a chord deep within me. ;)

As for my poem, Tetris Life, it was indeed meant to be metaphorical. I read it again a few weeks ago and only then realized how morbid and suicidal it sounded.

Anyway, this is supposed to be a review of your poem, and I will leave off saying I liked it very much and that you should keep writing!
anon63 chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Pretty good. The 'tween and 'neath's bothered me but i can't really explain why... "Hers was the heart 'neath the floorboards

That beat soundless rhythms in the dark" that REALLY reminded me of 'The TellTale Heart' is you've ever read it.
illuzion chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
beautiful. eloquently written.