Reviews for Looking Up
reality-forsaken chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
really deep,nice description
silverxwings144 chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
wow thats awesome. it expresses the desperate cries of our heart to be free from darkness and despair, its longings to live in the light and warmth... it! keep up the incredible work
End Of The Innocence chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
Did I ever mention how much I really HATE YOU! People shouldn't be allowed to be so talented. They should be hung by their balls! Yes, I said balls.
A Phantom Stranger chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
To be honest I enjoyed this one more than your love poems...I spose because the feeling was more real for me. I want to commend you both for being able to make your two poems/stanzas fit together without there being an unsightly and terribly obvious change from one to the other well done...I have never shared a poem its an interesting idea
deepdown chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
very sad... yet a very strong poem. i dunno why. i guess its just coz i like the last few lines, they just seem... oh, i dont know. im useless. well done. and to your girlfriend as well.
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
I like it. Nice poem. I think you guys are great together!
Savak chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
Your girlfriend is very, very lucky to have a guy who writes poetry for her. That reminds me of Pablo Neruda, who wrote a hundred and one poems to read to his bride for the first 101 days they were married... I can just picture the one-hundrd and second day, though...

Anyway, nice poem. And thanks for reviewing mine... though I don't know what you meant in relation to the actual work. ::wink::
Living Haunted chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
oh...this is so how i feel on a daily basis...but isn't there a medication for that..:)