Another exciting chapter. I was worried that the Maresh would find Aseeki.

Update soon, Good Job!

Very good chapter, I like the idea of mood sensitive color changing eyes.

I'd like to use that in some of my aliens, with your permission, of corse.

Good plot, you're developing, Aseeki's plight. That he doesn't belong in either species.

Great job!

Very intriguing beginning.

Great despriptions and dialogues.

Grat job!

that was great. I'm beginning to love this story already. Hope the next chapter comes soon!

yay! u've started another story, this one sounds great. It's a very good start. ;)

-bish

I hope this story will eventually have a message about racism.

Whoo, Sydney! My old home, and how I miss it. *sigh* And to think I lost my accent too. Sometimes life is so harsh. -Darn this blasted American accent!

Anyway, it was rather good. I'm not typically into the whole alien-take-over-the-world thing, but I could widen my options a bit. This story is well written, and it's kinda cool how you're writing it with another friend. One of my friends and I tried to do that but the story didn't really get anywhere, so we called it quits. *shrug*

I'll look out for the next chapter. Later, Silver!

-Riley