FUCK YEAH! This is exactly how I feel about my girlfriend. Gay pride! _ Definately one of my favs. Much love!

-Tiff

I loved that! It was so full of life! I really liked the brackets technique too! That was wonderful!

Very interesting. Ok, I really just wanted to say that those who talk openly about those type of feelings have guts. Yeah, I don't like stuff like that but I am tolerant of it. Bye.(I'm a girl that likes guys only type of person.)

I love this poem and i know exactly how you feel, because you're gay and ppl dont seem to care to understand

That was great! I get what you mean, too. I came out as a lesbian just recently, and everyone's giving me all this crap about it...One guy (who apparently liked me...oops...) kept telling me that I can't be gay because
A.( God wouldn't like it. *scoff*
and B.) Because AIDS is created by two people of the same sex sleeping together.
I just about strangled his hetero ass...Anyway, keep up the good work!

This is EXCELLENT. The rhyming is perfect! Ah, this has made me happy today.
-Kris (the rather loud)

great poem! keep writing

Wow! I don't think that I could have ever put it that way! You are amazing!

Rock on, my sister.

I love it! Yay for the chin-up pride! Keep writing!

Yeah! You tell em'! This is so great! The parantheses add a great effect; I've never seen anything like it, but I like it a lot. One would think something like that would kill the flow, but it actually adds to it. The rhythm is perfect too.

It's beautiful...vivavacious...empowering. i don't know the word but its kind of a cross between the three. the rhyming and rhthym are excellent and the subject is wonderful and close to your heart. and really why not be proud? i hope one day my sister will be able to stand proud in front of everyone like you

I LOVE it, hon! Wonderful pace and rythem, which I believe are two of the most important thing in poetry writing. After emotion, and this poem is full of all three. Great little piece. Keep writing!

Dreamaway,

Go girl! I love your poem and your pride.

Love,

Tony

really nicely written, theorital love? or does this love have a name, that simply flows from your lips.