Reviews for Pride
Ingenue Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
FUCK YEAH! This is exactly how I feel about my girlfriend. Gay pride! _ Definately one of my favs. Much love!

Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
I loved that! It was so full of life! I really liked the brackets technique too! That was wonderful!
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Very interesting. Ok, I really just wanted to say that those who talk openly about those type of feelings have guts. Yeah, I don't like stuff like that but I am tolerant of it. Bye.(I'm a girl that likes guys only type of person.)
Jamith chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
I love this poem and i know exactly how you feel, because you're gay and ppl dont seem to care to understand
Krechet chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
That was great! I get what you mean, too. I came out as a lesbian just recently, and everyone's giving me all this crap about it...One guy (who apparently liked me...oops...) kept telling me that I can't be gay because
A.( God wouldn't like it. *scoff*
and B.) Because AIDS is created by two people of the same sex sleeping together.
I just about strangled his hetero ass...Anyway, keep up the good work!
emperor heliogabalus chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
This is EXCELLENT. The rhyming is perfect! Ah, this has made me happy today.
-Kris (the rather loud)
boytoy13 chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
great poem! keep writing
Loud and Out of Key chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Wow! I don't think that I could have ever put it that way! You are amazing!
Turtle2 chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
Rock on, my sister.
Dhampir chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
I love it! Yay for the chin-up pride! Keep writing!
burp chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Yeah! You tell em'! This is so great! The parantheses add a great effect; I've never seen anything like it, but I like it a lot. One would think something like that would kill the flow, but it actually adds to it. The rhythm is perfect too.
whyt forest chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
It's beautiful...vivavacious...empowering. i don't know the word but its kind of a cross between the three. the rhyming and rhthym are excellent and the subject is wonderful and close to your heart. and really why not be proud? i hope one day my sister will be able to stand proud in front of everyone like you
VolumeInfinity chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
I LOVE it, hon! Wonderful pace and rythem, which I believe are two of the most important thing in poetry writing. After emotion, and this poem is full of all three. Great little piece. Keep writing!
TonyStephen chapter 1 . 8/2/2003

Go girl! I love your poem and your pride.


dreamaway fan chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
really nicely written, theorital love? or does this love have a name, that simply flows from your lips.
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