Reviews for Sweet Emotions
Prodigee123 chapter 12 . 11/14/2013
Prodigee123 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
interesting story idea
AriMarie87 chapter 16 . 6/20/2008
Amazing as always! You are truley a very talented writer, I hope to read more!
Eccthlacine chapter 16 . 12/16/2007
sweet story. Wasn't at all boring, though some points where they were talking i was hard to understand where people entered and who was talking, but that might not have been your fault, if so, ignore me! i loved your story, it was sweet and fluffy P and made me tear up a bit too.
Katherine-the-greate chapter 16 . 11/18/2007
Great story. if i could change one thing though, it would be to put something in between the sceene changes. it is some times hard to tell where one place starts and the other ends. thanks for posting your story!
Katherine-the-greate chapter 5 . 11/18/2007
was it really a horse? hm
Katherine-the-greate chapter 3 . 11/18/2007
that was an ineristing chapter
Katherine-the-greate chapter 2 . 11/18/2007
poor Jayden. Could there be so more dilogue. there is hardly a word passed between them most of the time and it makes her seem like a mute.
Katherine-the-greate chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
wonderful first chapter. You introduce all of your characters very well, except for Jayden. I can't tell how old she is. thanks for posting
FM Radio chapter 13 . 11/7/2007
Jayden is NURSING! Her breasts are fully of MILK! Melody is not! (I think) stupid people
Tempest116 chapter 16 . 7/26/2007
beautiful story.
youpin chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Good story.
Strangely Natural chapter 16 . 11/9/2006
Such a touching and well written story, very authentic I love it!
a passing reader chapter 16 . 10/2/2006
your story is beautifully written and i was most encaptivated by it. The only problem is that it's a little confusing between the change of scenes as there is nothing dividing the two paragraphs. change it and it shall be perfect.
vintagelove chapter 10 . 3/20/2006
haha, love it so far.
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