Reviews for Sweet Emotions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing as always! You are truley a very talented writer, I hope to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet story. Wasn't at all boring, though some points where they were talking i was hard to understand where people entered and who was talking, but that might not have been your fault, if so, ignore me! i loved your story, it was sweet and fluffy P and made me tear up a bit too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. if i could change one thing though, it would be to put something in between the sceene changes. it is some times hard to tell where one place starts and the other ends. thanks for posting your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() was it really a horse? hm |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was an ineristing chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor Jayden. Could there be so more dilogue. there is hardly a word passed between them most of the time and it makes her seem like a mute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful first chapter. You introduce all of your characters very well, except for Jayden. I can't tell how old she is. thanks for posting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jayden is NURSING! Her breasts are fully of MILK! Melody is not! (I think) stupid people |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a touching and well written story, very authentic I love it! |
![]() ![]() your story is beautifully written and i was most encaptivated by it. The only problem is that it's a little confusing between the change of scenes as there is nothing dividing the two paragraphs. change it and it shall be perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, love it so far. |