Reviews for Always Forever, Just Not For Now
sirozorg chapter 35 . 2/8/2011
Aubrey is so cute and kind *_* she deserves a happy ending T_T (With Mic i hope _) Thx for the chapter!
midnightwrighter chapter 34 . 2/6/2011
wow... Update 2 chapters

-midnightwrighter :)
Lady Macbeth's Murderer chapter 34 . 2/6/2011

Did you say Laura?


Guess who I want Mic to get with at the end?

ALSO, sorry I didn't review the last chapter, only read it this morning. But now. LET ME READ WHO SHE CALLS.

let it be LAURA.


nandinhama chapter 33 . 2/5/2011
That was wonderful!

You write very well, you can connect the facts perfectly.

Best of all are the characters and their qualities and defects written concisely.

Anyway, I really liked the story.

sirozorg chapter 33 . 2/5/2011
I miss the friendship between Mic and Tory T_T...and thx for the update! _
Lady Macbeth's Murderer chapter 32 . 2/3/2011
EHM. The more I read 'un-Laura' chapters, the more I wish you'd make it clearer whether or not Aubrey and Mic belong together or whether Mic should really be with Laura. THIS IS KILLING ME.

Expect bombing tonight. Your bunker is under threat.

... just kiding...

XLil :P
oh-windermere chapter 30 . 2/1/2011
I've been meaning to say for quite a while that everytime I see you've updated, I cheer up, regardless of the mood I'm in. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for picking this story up again and continuing it.

Tory's voice is much less mature than Mic's, but I think it's almost unrealistically immature at times, or presented unrealistically ("It made me feel like a dragon").

You might want to consider having someone look over your writing, as there are some missing words and various typos. However, the dialogue is always great. Your characters are fantastic. They're very consistently-written and well-written. Overall, I just love this story. Again, thank you for writing this.
Sam chapter 31 . 2/1/2011
I'm not great at reviewing but figured I would let you know I read each chapter almost as soon as it comes out and have for years. I love this story and although I can't decide enough to answer your questions I can say that I'm sure you'll pick the best way to write the story :) thank you for such good reads. (and for the wicked fast updates!)
Lady Macbeth's Murderer chapter 31 . 2/1/2011
Dear Adam,

You bunker isn't safe enough. I will invet technology to go through your bunker just to get more Laura. :P

Also. ALICE. I loved her. LOVED HER. But NO! Adam just needs to take her away too...

Lady Macbeth's Murderer chapter 30 . 1/31/2011

Also. good job you uploaded them both. Or else I would have hunted you down until you did. Just you know, because I love Laura this much. She's SO DAMN AWESOME.


Great story!

sirozorg chapter 30 . 1/31/2011
Whoa! 2 chapters! thx _ I'm starting to love laura T_T she's so cute! and Mic, she should clear her mind...i want more chapterss *_*
sirozorg chapter 28 . 1/30/2011
Thx for the update!... and about your question, i like the story between Mic and Aubrey, is addictive, and i like all about the story of Tory, i like this character so much _ so..., maybe you should keep writing about both... see you!
Lady Macbeth's Murderer chapter 28 . 1/30/2011

Also, much prefer Mic's chapters. Don't really have that much sympathy for Tory. Really couldn't tell you why, though :)

Untitled3579 chapter 25 . 1/29/2011
This story is brilliant! I'm really enjoying it. I love the fact that your two protagonists are very three-dimensional

and relateable.

Keep going! Great Job! :D
sirozorg chapter 27 . 1/29/2011
I like your story so much! update more _
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