Aubrey is so cute and kind *_* she deserves a happy ending T_T (With Mic i hope _) Thx for the chapter!

wow... Update 2 chapters

-midnightwrighter :)

LAURA LAURA LAURA LAURA.

Did you say Laura?

:P

Guess who I want Mic to get with at the end?

ALSO, sorry I didn't review the last chapter, only read it this morning. But now. LET ME READ WHO SHE CALLS.

let it be LAURA.

:P

XLil

That was wonderful!

You write very well, you can connect the facts perfectly.

Best of all are the characters and their qualities and defects written concisely.

Anyway, I really liked the story.

Congratulations!

I miss the friendship between Mic and Tory T_T...and thx for the update! _

EHM. The more I read 'un-Laura' chapters, the more I wish you'd make it clearer whether or not Aubrey and Mic belong together or whether Mic should really be with Laura. THIS IS KILLING ME.

Expect bombing tonight. Your bunker is under threat.

... just kiding...

XLil :P

I've been meaning to say for quite a while that everytime I see you've updated, I cheer up, regardless of the mood I'm in. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for picking this story up again and continuing it.

Tory's voice is much less mature than Mic's, but I think it's almost unrealistically immature at times, or presented unrealistically ("It made me feel like a dragon").

You might want to consider having someone look over your writing, as there are some missing words and various typos. However, the dialogue is always great. Your characters are fantastic. They're very consistently-written and well-written. Overall, I just love this story. Again, thank you for writing this.

I'm not great at reviewing but figured I would let you know I read each chapter almost as soon as it comes out and have for years. I love this story and although I can't decide enough to answer your questions I can say that I'm sure you'll pick the best way to write the story :) thank you for such good reads. (and for the wicked fast updates!)

Dear Adam,

You bunker isn't safe enough. I will invet technology to go through your bunker just to get more Laura. :P

Also. ALICE. I loved her. LOVED HER. But NO! Adam just needs to take her away too...

XxLil

GIVE LAURA LIKE HALF A SECOND OF HAPPINESS, WILL YOU? Also. loved the chapter :)

Also. good job you uploaded them both. Or else I would have hunted you down until you did. Just you know, because I love Laura this much. She's SO DAMN AWESOME.

*cough*

Great story!

XLil

Whoa! 2 chapters! thx _ I'm starting to love laura T_T she's so cute! and Mic, she should clear her mind...i want more chapterss *_*

Thx for the update!... and about your question, i like the story between Mic and Aubrey, is addictive, and i like all about the story of Tory, i like this character so much _ so..., maybe you should keep writing about both... see you!

LOVE LAURA, can't WAIT :P

Also, much prefer Mic's chapters. Don't really have that much sympathy for Tory. Really couldn't tell you why, though :)

XLil

This story is brilliant! I'm really enjoying it. I love the fact that your two protagonists are very three-dimensional

and relateable.

Keep going! Great Job! :D

I like your story so much! update more _