I can't believe how much I can empathise with Tory and Morgan, it's frightening me how well you're writing the characters. I thought the last paragraph was a little awkward-sounding, but other than that, Tory's inner voice is perfect, not overly sentimental or angsty and a good contrast to Mic's more mature one. Now write more, pretty please.

You have got to update soon this story is great. *smiles* And please don't ever say anything about having my children of I'll beat you up!

oh this is starting to get interesting. Great job so far.

This story is great. I can't wait to read more.

Excellent chapter 3 Adam. Very impressive dialogue between Tory and . I loved "rebels without a clue" i laughed like hell from that line. Also the very last line about sacrifice was very intense and gave an inside look at Mic Gordon. I am really liking this story and want to thank you for sharing your talents and for updating so soon. You are really good . Keep writing Adam.

I loved the dialogue, you have the confident air of a teacher down perfectly. I also liked how you didn't villainise Tory just so that Mic could have someone to argue with.

This story seems to be growing stronger as it progresses. I'm now waiting for Chapter 3...

Whoa well i can see Tory is going to be a real interesting kind of girl. Excellent follow up to the first chapter dude. I really like your writing and the subject is also great. While Mic's got her hands full with Tory's indignation and questions i'll just have to wait to see what happens next. You write it Adam. I'll read. Ok, ok.

Very sweet beginning Adam. I love the idea of a homecoming for Mic of sorts. This story had so much potential and i like the intimacy of details. The harshness and softness you ellicit from your written words. I hope you conitnue this story. It's good so far.