Reviews for Carnival
Faerie Corpse chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Oh, this is so sweet. I wish real love was like this.
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
hmm...if only love were really like this...very sweet, and it flows nicely.
Gina chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Whimsical and romantic. Makes me wanna take off my shoes and dance on the lawn with the sprinkler on.
Twisted Illusion chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
Oh this one is so sweet! I have absolutely no complaints about your work, hehe. Whoever you wrote this about is so lucky that someone would write a poem for them. Gosh wish someone would write a poem for me, lol.

AVIGON chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
I loved the concept. The wording and all didn't really work out for me, but in the end, you still have a sweet little poem to show for it. ;o)