Oh, this is so sweet. I wish real love was like this.

hmm...if only love were really like this...very sweet, and it flows nicely.

Whimsical and romantic. Makes me wanna take off my shoes and dance on the lawn with the sprinkler on.

Oh this one is so sweet! I have absolutely no complaints about your work, hehe. Whoever you wrote this about is so lucky that someone would write a poem for them. Gosh wish someone would write a poem for me, lol.

Lyn

I loved the concept. The wording and all didn't really work out for me, but in the end, you still have a sweet little poem to show for it. ;o)