Reviews for Family and Friends, Water and Blood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sao: I think you should continue posting this. HOS: It sounds like a really promising story, although I feel really bad for Riley. I can't imagine what that's like! Sao: And I hope I never have first hand experience, or anyone else for that matter. But if you continue this, we'll read it. So w/e you choose to do, cool. ~Sao & HOS P.S. Jonathan is the coolest person, Riley should date him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm, you're going to keep adding, right? *wink wink* *hint hint* *nudge nudge* *beg beg* right...ok, i want you to try really hard. it sounds like something i wrote once, but i didn't really take it anywhere. but you should! this is very interesting. age? i'm guessing teens since she's still stuck with her parents? it is confusing that she is still beaten but can drive/smoke/and whatnot. it's good, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you can't judge this by the same crtieria for a poem... all in all, this was pretty good...you should post more... |