Reviews for Tired
Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
ooh how i admire you and your work! your simply amazing, and i dont know what else to say!

Reptils chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Trotz des düsteren Inhalts ein sehr schönes, harmonisches Gedicht. Wirklich gut gelungen, auch wenn ich jetzt im Moment nicht festmachen könnte, warum es mir so gut gefällt.

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not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
interesting, love the words in caps, definitely added a little something to the poem, love the lines. "I'll set the horizon on fire/with my vison of tomorrow" and "Now I appreciate every single pain/because my longing was in vain" esp that last one, i dunno, just really stuck well in my head, good flow too, anywayz, muchly enjoyed, excellent job
unwritten chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
i like it, nice job! and thank you for reviewing my poem (all they have asked for), and feel free to reand and review any of my others.