Reviews for Yasha Hybrid |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! *falls over* (This review ish for both chapters ) A HUGE cliffhanger! Kitty no like cliffhangers... even if she leaves them all the time.. ; Those chapters were great! *hugs* Maru and Sasha.. *sniff* It's too great! I can't wait until you update the next chappie! You have to update soon! (btw, the reason why I'm not on MSN right now is so I can concentrate majorly on updating stories.. ;; Hehehe) Kitty shall be waiting for the next chapter! Toya: Me too! So you've gotta hurry! Oh! I updated on "The Heart of an Angel" too! Just to let ya know! *hugs again* Well chicka, I'll talk to ya later! Love yaz! - ~Kitty |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chappie. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And Heres da one for this one. And if I already did review it... well... heres another one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ops... this one too. Did I review chapter 2? Gatta go look -.-. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. While reading at school I got through this chapter after reading through all the other ones over again. - . Well heres da review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh... - This binder is thick! Well... as soon as I read through all da chapters I'll review each and every one... just like I promised. MUST PERFECT THE BINDER FIRST |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aiyee! *huggles* Hey Ravage! It's been so long! XD I miss ya! *takes a deep breath* AIYE! Such a good chapter! I loved it! New turns and what not... oh man! I absolutely loved it, and I can't wait for more! M-U-S-T... U-P-D-A-T-E... SON! o.O; Hehehe, oops! ;; Love yaz! Can't wait for more! ~Kitty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this is getting pretty good. Soory I haven't sent the pics for my story. I'll send you the Maru one right now. Well, anyway, if you ever want to talk, IM me on AOL with the screen name Giscleo. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I havent reviewed in a while. Its just that I have had next to no time when I can do any reading. I write stuff at school sometimes on my free time and type it up and post it. And then when I did read, for a while you still had that message up saying that you were taking a break. I saw 8 chapters and didnt think that you updated it. ANYWAY- one thing that bothered me was that you said that sagee "severed the demon's head off." you dont sever something off, because the definition of sever is to cut off. Other than that, there were lots of spacng errors and leter mix-ups. and at one point, the story seemed to change from speaking in past tense to present. But we all do that at one point, right? Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aloha! Sorry it took me so long to review.. things have gotten worse.. *sighs* Anyway, AWESOME chapter! hehe, Sasha has to have Blade follow her wherever she goes.. that's funny! And then the kiss between Sasha and Shinta... o_O THAT was shocking, and SO good at the same time! Aiyee! Oh man.. Sagee and the whole anger thing.. BAM that rocked! I so can't wait for the next chapter... the anxiety is shredding! ; hehe. Well, gotta go.. Christmas Eve! _ I'll be waiting for the next chappie! Heh, ; I've got some updating to do too... lol. I hope you have a Merry Christmas! hehe, and I'm glad you liked the picture of Maru. Ja ne! *hugs* Have a Merry Christmas, and I hope your wishes come true! Your friend, ~Kitty~ Toya: See ya Ravage! ~ Kitty: Ja ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! *pounces* Hiya! hehe, I'm glad ya updated! *deep breath* Oh MAN! That was a good chapter! The whole thing with Maru *sniffles* and Sasha.. that was sweet when she held him... I was sniffling and everything... *sniff* Then the fight.. woo! That was pretty neat... *grabs a Tetsusaiga and holds it at Yuri Sai* DIE YOU! ; That was a neat dream, and totally unexpected.. I liked it! Man... I can't wait till Yuri Sai dies... wait, he's gonna die, right? ; lol. Anyway, I can't wait for your next update! It's getting SO good! I also hope you get better.. v_v Being sick bites BIG time.. I'll pray for you and that you get better. Well, gotta go! I'll talk to ya later! ~ Ja ne! Your friend, ~Kitty~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm so sorry for taking long on reviewing.. v_v I hope you can forgive me? But that chapter was so good. Sasha kissed Maru and he kissed her back! *sniffles* So beautiful! And then the whole incident with Shinta and the fire, oh man the poor guy. Hehe, I wish I could use an attack like that. If I could have fire over my hands and burn a tree like Maru did... *jumps with joy* That'd be awesome! hehe. Aiyee! I'm anxious to know about the vampire... cliff-hanger! x_X *falls over* I so can't wait for the next chapter! What's gonna happen with the vampire and Maru, Shinta, Miko.. and is Kiko going to attack? *squeals* Oh the suspense! And then Sasha and her mom.. hehe, I'm glad she's ok. I hope nothing spoils their fun! All demons and what not.. stay away from Sasha and her mom otherwise I'll pull out Yuuhi's chopsticks (from Ceres, Celestial Legend) and kick some youkai butt! ;; hehe. Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! This story is getting soo awesome! Oh! And I was wondering if I could give it a try at drawing your characters! hehe, I wanna draw Sasha, and possibly Maru too. I have a cute image in my mind. Well, I'll talk to you later... o_O heh, I didn't realize how long my review was! hehe, anyway, ja ne! ~Kitty~ Toya: Aloha! Loved this chapter, next one soon! *waves* ...tell mutt face high too.. *smirks* Kitty: ; heh, oh dear. Talk later! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME! TELL ME! TELL ME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't worry about it. It happens to plenty of people. Just take your time doing whatever you need to do. Fictionpress is nowhere near a first priority in comparison to anything. Hope you get back soon, though! |