This is very good. Very full of emoition

I could really relate to this. I liked the poem a lot and you rhymed well;)

Wow - your emotion came across really really well in this poem. The rhymes could have used a little smoothing over, but you've got the ability to get your reader to understand. You can't learn that.

I like that poem a lot... I understand where youre coming from & i think its great that you won't change for anyone! It's a great poem!