Reviews for Junshin Kokuzoku Motoki: Kanbou Hatsu
Kouichi chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Wonderful...truly amazing. keep it up.
Shuyan chapter 19 . 2/28/2005
Great story! Nice, lengthy, good detail, good description of the charecters and whats happening around them. If you have any spare time can you check out my story Sword of the rightful hand
idesel chapter 18 . 9/2/2003
is that the end?...well it was really good really really good
Nyx Valdemar chapter 18 . 9/2/2003
HA! I FINISHED BEFORE MOTOKI 3 WAS EVEN POSTED! *knows that this is because FictionPress is being a genderless and won't let you upload* Wow! Z'is was even better z'an Motoki 1! FP better stop bein' a Peggy soon, 'cause I wanna read Motoki 3 ASAP! AS SOON AS PICKLES!

::- ~* Selena *~ -::
Nyx Valdemar chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Well, I've started Motoki 2! Maybe I'll finish reading it before you finish writing Motoki 3... Maybe, ... There's chance. Well, t'is good so far, but you already knew zat as we are speakling at ze moment and ... 69! XDXDXDXDXDXDD

::- ~* Selena *~ -::
Ben Roshi chapter 14 . 8/19/2003
wow amazing story, the dialogue is great and its really getting interesting. Keep going with it!
Warshadowfh chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
wow rodolf you were riht this is a great story.