Wonderful...truly amazing. keep it up.

Great story! Nice, lengthy, good detail, good description of the charecters and whats happening around them. If you have any spare time can you check out my story Sword of the rightful hand

is that the end?...well it was really good really really good

HA! I FINISHED BEFORE MOTOKI 3 WAS EVEN POSTED! *knows that this is because FictionPress is being a genderless and won't let you upload* Wow! Z'is was even better z'an Motoki 1! FP better stop bein' a Peggy soon, 'cause I wanna read Motoki 3 ASAP! AS SOON AS PICKLES!

::- ~* Selena *~ -::

Well, I've started Motoki 2! Maybe I'll finish reading it before you finish writing Motoki 3... Maybe, ... There's chance. Well, t'is good so far, but you already knew zat as we are speakling at ze moment and ... 69! XDXDXDXDXDXDD

::- ~* Selena *~ -::

wow amazing story, the dialogue is great and its really getting interesting. Keep going with it!

wow rodolf you were riht this is a great story.