Reviews for Girl in the corner
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
There is something that confuses me about this one - "dig in deep in"...did you want to take the last "in" off that? With it on there, it doesn't really make sense. At least, to me it doesn't.

I can relate with this poem. I know all to well what it feels like to be the girl in the corner alone.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw