Reviews for The Way
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
wow this really is bittersweet. I don't hate it but i don't love it. It's okay. Peace.
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
oh, me likie this poem, me very likie.
yellow sparks chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Very good description of the changes in this person in the poem. I like how the feelings go from good to bad just like that. It really makes the poem more interesting and different.
Mime chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
That's the way I sometimes feel with my parents...good job!
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
This is one of those poems that should be rhymed. If there is all that repetition in the beginning of the line, I expect there to be repetition in the word sounds at the end of the poem. I dunno. It sounds weird to me without a rhyme, and even as I was reading it was I trying to invent one for it, because that's how anal retentive and overly picky about poems I am. o_O

Anyway, I know what you are saying...men are confusing. Unless this is a girl you are talking about...but they are confusing too. :P

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw