Reviews for But You
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
This is a good poem. The emotion is well portrayed. Peace.
myno chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
the title is perfect, and it's quite a good poem.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
All I have to say is that I feel really bed poor a really good poem, really makes you think.
angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
this is pretty damn good I like it
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Another great poem! I love this one cuz you wrote it from your parents' point of view. There aren't many poems out there like that.
Wrong-side-of-heaven chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
Hey, it's really refreshing to read something so different, looking at things from different points of views. Keep up the good work!
yellow sparks chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Aww..Wow. My last poem, I made you cry, and this one made me cry. It's a very true poem. All your parent's want to do is help, but you really just want a peer to talk to. But really, sometimes peers don't understand. I really like this poem. Great job!
quietdrama22 chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
wow...I am sure that this is how my mom and other peoples parents must feel. Emotionful, and good keep writing
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Aw, the parent must feel very hurt. Good poem.
Mime chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
That was really mournful. I can almost feel the pain expressed in the second stanza.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
I think you should change the last line...somehow it's not as final, and using "help" like that at the end of the line twice is kinda awkward.

Otherwise, I like it. Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw