That poem was exceptionally short, which made it interesting. I liked it a lot. xD; Great job.

This is so insanely good... like... I can't even explain how good this is. This is one of the best poems I've ever read. I love the subtle rhyming. It's enough to make it seem organized, yet chaotic. The repetition of "slash" really gives a vivid mental picture too. I know so many people that have cut themselves to escape reality, and I considered it for awhile, because it seemed so logical. So this poem was not only beautifully done, but it was something I could relate to. The last line was a little expected, but still a good ending. My favorite lines were "I'm hungry.../ slash-I don't have to eat today" and "what problem?/slash-see, I'm just fine." because it portrays depression oh so well. Wonderfully done, I look forward to the next time you post!

that's a really good poem... i used to cut & you expressed it very well considering you've never done it before

i liked it a lot. i know several ppl with that problem.

There is something about this that is bothering me, and I can't put my finger on it. Well, just to be the grammar Nazi..."here" should be "hear". ; I think it's because the "Slash" wasn't really emphasized enough...maybe if you had made it italic or added an exclaimation point it would have seemed more vehement. Just my opinion, though.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw