Reviews for Colors
Moquink chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
YOU! Either update or e-mail it to me. You always do this, and i never get to finish any of your stories.


destinyksofsb chapter 3 . 8/3/2003
This is a very touching story. I can't wait to see where you take this, update soon.
Twilight Gurl chapter 3 . 7/31/2003
That was touching. Maybe, when describing Briget Mae's two different lives, with her mom and her foster parents, you could use a little more flow. It was a little too blunt for me. It was great otherwise!

Always 'n' Forever

Daisy Decamps chapter 2 . 7/30/2003
Aw, so sad, so touching. I love it. and the idea of the mother giving the child a magic book is so original. Keep it up. I'll be checking back.


Twilight Gurl chapter 2 . 7/29/2003
Oh my gosh. *tearing up* *tears* that was an emotional one. *phew* okay, i think the one thing is maybe longer chapters? i don't know, I'm trying to help.

Always 'n' Forever

Twilight Gurl chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Well...I must's different all right. I think it'll pick up in the next chapter.

Always 'n' Forever

Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Oh, I love the intro. You make colors sound so deep, so mysterious, in a way I've never thought about before. Plz keep writing. I'll check back to read it. Good work. .