Reviews for Confused
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Very nice, awesome job.
marshbar960 chapter 2 . 9/30/2005
i especially liked the lines "bombarded with mixed feelings" and "or line them up into neat little rows". thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
very intense and emotional! thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
Indigo-Andie chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
ooh i love it, especially the last line. it's so true i just...o ..good job...oh and btw if your wondering why those two poems of mine which you just reviewed sound familiar it's because i re-uploaded them because of their
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
A whirl of uncertainties and confusions.
queenvixta chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
I like both versions of this but I think you're write the 2nd is better, it's more raw and passionate. I like these pieces a lot. QueenVixta
Anna178 chapter 2 . 8/20/2005
Well I can't distinctly remember the poem this was edited off of. Well I know the title, but couldn't really recall the difference. No offense to you though, your amazing. But I have like 70 people on my author alert, so I review at least a 80 or 90 poems a month.

Anyway, relentless of the poem that came before this, its brilliant now.

catseyeview chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
good topic!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 8/17/2005
one question: how come everything has like 2 or more chts now? just wondering...

i like this, as i do most of your writing. tho its not a fav
breezy nostrils chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
I this version a lot more. It really emphasized more on the best lines. Nice job!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
i liked the last stanza it was good. i liked the neat little rows part. :) awesome job keep posting!
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
I know the feeling. It sucks. *sigh* what can you do...
Rosanna28 chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
Hmm..I don't know which one I like better..They're both really good and I love them!

Much love, Rosanna.
someday-i-will chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
I like the structure of this poem. The wording is a little better than the original poem. I like
Princess-anna57 chapter 2 . 8/13/2005
Nice! Keep it up!

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