Reviews for I Can't Believe It's Not Liverwurst!
ThePotterFreak chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I liked the story in the beginning, but the fact that you put smileys(!) in it just kills it.

Sorry. And I'm not trying to flame you or anything, I just think you need to know that if you put smileys into a story it makes it look laughable and stupid. And not in a good or funny way.

I for one don't want to read it when it's like that. Sorry.

I still really like the plot, but you kinda did ruin the story with the smileys and the angel-devil-conscience-true self-inner idiot thing... seriously.

I hope I didn't offend you! After all this is just my opinion :)

xxx

Mira
beloved18 chapter 2 . 10/10/2006
o me likey
Shance chapter 5 . 8/17/2006
mwhahaha! Canada's funny... update more!
Lady Surreal chapter 6 . 6/6/2006
You need to update! I did so you have too to now. Or something like that. XD
Becca chapter 6 . 9/24/2005
Florian is AWSOME! *hold up little flag that syas "Florian" with a little heart on it* ... *hold up another little flag that says "Eros/Mel" and it has a bunch of little hearts on it* *waves flags happily*
SnookAsain chapter 6 . 9/12/2005
I just finnish reading ur story(i wanted 2 write 1 review so u won't have 2 deal w/all those other reviews)newayz i love ur story, i was laugh so hard when Mel has one of his inner thought-thingies. please update(no hurries).
Irony's Prey chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
what happens next?i must knoweros is definetly my favoriteso did the oreos do anything strange to you?plese write more
squirrel chapter 6 . 4/5/2005
HI TARA! hehe i like how you worked the liverwurst in!
Acid Dreams chapter 6 . 1/26/2005
hehehehehe, I LUFFS IT! pwease wite more?
PirateGrrl chapter 6 . 1/11/2005
Come on, you must write more. This is adorable.
Cute Little Mongoose chapter 6 . 11/19/2004
you must hery and .i'll love you forever end ever and erver and .hay and windstarsandwave is my cousin. yup me cousin..
Cute Little Mongoose chapter 5 . 11/19/2004
ah! me likey the last ! i can't stop giggling..
Cute Little Mongoose chapter 4 . 11/19/2004
you are evil evil evil evil evil evil evil!EVIL EVIL EVIL little meanie!yup yup you are you are. i like the story.i tink it yup. cute cute..
Starlite Nightfall chapter 6 . 10/23/2004
HAHAHA, that was nice, it happened kinda fast, but who gives a fuck? I likes it, it was nice. I like Mel's conflicting emotions and Florian and Eros. You makes good charies! GO YOU! Update son. OKISH? okish. and next chappie, let there be ass-grabage! Just for me, pweese? *smiles innocently* BYE NOW! I'll review ur next chapter...WILL. Don't make me wait long..ha..*waves*
Mytheos chapter 6 . 10/8/2004
Please Update
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