Reviews for I Can't Believe It's Not Liverwurst! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story in the beginning, but the fact that you put smileys(!) in it just kills it. Sorry. And I'm not trying to flame you or anything, I just think you need to know that if you put smileys into a story it makes it look laughable and stupid. And not in a good or funny way. I for one don't want to read it when it's like that. Sorry. I still really like the plot, but you kinda did ruin the story with the smileys and the angel-devil-conscience-true self-inner idiot thing... seriously. I hope I didn't offend you! After all this is just my opinion :) xxx Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() o me likey |
![]() ![]() ![]() mwhahaha! Canada's funny... update more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to update! I did so you have too to now. Or something like that. XD |
![]() ![]() Florian is AWSOME! *hold up little flag that syas "Florian" with a little heart on it* ... *hold up another little flag that says "Eros/Mel" and it has a bunch of little hearts on it* *waves flags happily* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finnish reading ur story(i wanted 2 write 1 review so u won't have 2 deal w/all those other reviews)newayz i love ur story, i was laugh so hard when Mel has one of his inner thought-thingies. please update(no hurries). |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happens next?i must knoweros is definetly my favoriteso did the oreos do anything strange to you?plese write more |
![]() ![]() HI TARA! hehe i like how you worked the liverwurst in! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehehehe, I LUFFS IT! pwease wite more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Come on, you must write more. This is adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you must hery and .i'll love you forever end ever and erver and .hay and windstarsandwave is my cousin. yup me cousin.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! me likey the last ! i can't stop giggling.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are evil evil evil evil evil evil evil!EVIL EVIL EVIL little meanie!yup yup you are you are. i like the story.i tink it yup. cute cute.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHA, that was nice, it happened kinda fast, but who gives a fuck? I likes it, it was nice. I like Mel's conflicting emotions and Florian and Eros. You makes good charies! GO YOU! Update son. OKISH? okish. and next chappie, let there be ass-grabage! Just for me, pweese? *smiles innocently* BYE NOW! I'll review ur next chapter...WILL. Don't make me wait long..ha..*waves* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Update |