Reviews for Novus
Relix chapter 2 . 9/11/2004
Ok, I love sci-fi and I like the direction you are going with this one. It creates an aura of mystery too, which I like. So far so good, Ill add this to my favorite stories list, it has good potential! )
Cyan Fields chapter 2 . 8/10/2003
This is working well, you've fleshed out the background nicely and while telling us a little more about the story you've succeeded in creating more mystery in its place, an excellent job.

Keep on going...
Cyan Fields chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
I like where you're going with this - the idea of creating a world that works properly rather than just letting one happen as it goes along. Your sense of humour does come through pretty strongly, so please don't change that because it adds to the character detail, Alex's dry, impatient personality comes across almost straight away.

Just one niggle - try and make your paragraphs a little shorter, separate the text out each time there is a change of pace in the story. Reading a solid block of script often puts people off and they give up in frustration(glad I persevered, this was fun to read).

Please carry on - I promise that I will read each new chapter.